chapter 1

Chapter 1
The silence of the night filled the air, soon after the men gathered the dead, blood dripping off of ammo creates like a fresh cup of tea being poured, men screaming driving fear into the men that heard there deafing screams as they past the medic tent, the place was a mess, soon the rain slowed down washing away the sin’s of the mess the enemy had left behind.

Commander Redfren: “Now listen up you bunch of rag-a-muffin bunch of cowgirls, i want this place up and running not five minutes ago, now!!!!”

Heads turn like zombies to a brain, “sir yes sir”

Assaulter Juice1220: “i hope after we cleaned up this mess we get to have a hot shower or at least some fresh clothes”

Assaulter mu-dib: “oh yea like that is going to happen”

Assaulter juice1220:”well we can hope can’t we”

As the two guys were bickering like two hungry wolves over a prey, the command post’s tent flew open its doors, and out came a man, dressed in a muddy uniform, mud falling off his sweaty face as it dripped down to the ground.

Radio tech Lying_in_wait:” sir! Sir! I think you should come listen to this transmission.”

As lying turned back to the tent commander Redfren followed with a surprised face, as they entered they entered the tent, static was coming from the old looking radio.

Transmission: (static)........................ if anyone can hear me this is commander..................... (more static with shots heard) ...................jack hammer we have been under attack for.................some time now we are held up in district 14......................the helghan troops have us...................pinned down................9 out of 15 are left.................we are losing men left right and centre......................if anyone hears this.........................please send reinforcements.....................................Transmission ends.

As the face of the commander Redfren grows ever more concerned over the transmission that was just heard, he turned to lying.

Commander Redfren:” s**t! When was this transmission picked up?”

Radio tech lying_in_wait:” just a few minutes ago sir”

Commander Redfren:” where is district 14 located?”

Radio tech lying_in_wait: ”it’s not that far from here sir, a few miles in the aircraft sir”

Commander Redfren:” call in the blitzrift now, i want to go assemble a rescue
group”

Radio tech lying_in_wait:” yes sir”

As the commander left to assemble a small squad to leave the encampment, lying got on the radio and was still learning to use the x5291 model radio.

Radio tech lying_in_wait:” damn, damn, damn, how the hell does this thing transmit?”

For a few minute’s lying stared at the radio with a sudden rage burning up inside of him.

Pilot/spy Gouki_052:” wooooooooooooooooooooooo hoooooooooooooooooooo, coming in for a landing”

A startled lying fell off the old rusty chair, now wet and covered in mud the furious lying leap up and got straight back to the radio.

Radio tech lying_in_wait:” why do you always have to do that your an a**s you know that Gouki_052”

Pilot/spy Gouki_052:” ha ha ha!!!! Why are you always moaning, you know bud if i wanted to listen to a moaner i would have stayed back on backaton”

Radio tech lying_in_wait:” ha ha you’re an *BEEP* man, where the hell have you been?”

Pilot/spy Gouki_052:” well what would be telling now, lets just say here there and everywhere like I’ve picked up some think for you to have a look at as well, some sort of tape, it need decoding”

Radio tech lying_in_wait:” oh cool man, well the landing lights should be on now so hurry up and land”

The sky was lit as the blitzrift flew in for a landing, the aircraft was armed with 2 50mm cannons, 2 extendable rocket launchers, and 2 Gatling guns and attached to those were a further 2 laser guns, the aircraft was a dark red colour with grey strips running from one side to the other like two lighting bolts joining, with 3 extendable legs for landing, with 4 powerful light which were neon blue, with a fully loaded ammo bay filled to the teeth with ammo and a few guns for a crew of 7 plus one pilot, as the blitzrift landed the engines roaring the rain bouncing off the body and the wipers going, the flames out of the thrusters could roast a cow in seconds, as the craft landed a door opened from the side, out came a man with a futureary helmet only reserved for the best pilot’s, no one really knew Gouki_052 he has a mysterious past that only lying knew of, some think happened when they were on a mission, some think that they both wont talk about, as the guys greet each other, on the other side of the craft, commander Redfren was assembling the squad to lead the mission.

Commander Redfren:” listen up men, i have just received reports of a small battalion in trouble, so listen up you bunch of women, i will pick the best of you to escort me on this mission”

Assaulter mu-dib: “god i hope he don’t pick me”

Assaulter juice1220:”ahh don’t be such a women, were born and breed for this, time for us blood warriors to shine,”

Eagerly juice1220 was bouncing around like a woman in a clothes shop, with a smile on his face juice1220 was willing for a mission not knowing what his fate in this mission had installed for him and the other 6 members commander Redfren would choose. The men stood around some eager to go some not, most men stood to the back, shuffling backwards.

Commander Redfren:” well men don’t just stand there swallowing what man hood you have left, who is with me in this?”

Everyone stared at the commander like he was crazy, the history with Redfren was simple, he was born and raised in the military it was in his blood, nothing sounded better to Redfren than a battle than him winning or coming to a fellow commander of the same team’s rescue, as commander Redfren stood amongst his men with the same glow about him as when he received his medal promoting him to captain, with a glow in his heart and a weird, disturbing smile upon his face, that the men found oddly disturbing one by one a name was shouted by the leader of many, the leader of something amazing, the leader of the BLOODWARRIORS!!!!!!!

To be continued..................................

Very nice Toxic ! I eagerly await the following chapters. I cut and pasted and printed it out, and will do so withthe next ones as well.
ohh and thank you for making me a tough guy, ready to fight, although that also probably mean I will be the first to get a bullet in the head, not much different than my gameplay.
Keep up the great work.

"juice1220 was willing for a mission not knowing what his fate in this mission had installed for him"

- yea sounds like ur gettin writin out early but o well. its not a good war story w/o cannon fodder

wats dis wats dis, you got me act'n lik a busta

keep them coming... good work

sorry guys if it seems like your all going to be written off early but i can not leak any information to you guys about the story, you will all just have to wait for the next one tonight. why are you printing them out for juice?

regards toxic

I am printing them to keep in a shoebox, so when I get "really" old I can find it and think back on my youth, and remember my clan days.
Yeah it does sound like I am gonna get whacked soon, but at least I was ready to go bust some heads righ away unlike some other people........*cough*....mu-dib.......

thats a cool idea bud, well lets hope your not old anytime soon and like i said i wont be telling anyone what happens in the stroy so think what ya will guys this nuts not for cracking

regards toxic

I am already old. I will be turning 40 in March !!!!!!!!!!! 40 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Good god, when I was a kid and you met someone that was 40, it was like meeting a relic........ 40 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ahhhhh, well I am still a stupid kid at heart, and still do alot of stupid crap. I dont think I will ever grow up mentally, and always be the class clown and the guy that keeps getting in trouble. Plus I still to this day have a huge problem with authority. Hence 3 jobs in the past year. LOL !!!!!

Nice story ...the only thing missing is the cursing.....@%$&*...lol

40? well thats not a bad age older than me but really were all big kids at heart, i enjoy the simple things in life, and the story dont have to have swearing in it to make it a good story like, yes maybe now and again somethink init but not like f this n f that and f u n so orth dont think thats going to appeal to the right ppl do you, i think the only time you need to have that is in gangsta storys n stuff like that, this is a story fr the clan and is dedicated to the clan, and is ranged for a wide verfiaty of people, so im trying to keep swearing down to a min like.

regards toxic