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chapter 3 EmptySun Mar 13, 2011 8:20 pm by bigtimevvv
i want to get things started agen the new kz3 is out and going strong so post and lets get in contact asap
ill be on the forms everyday for the next few mo feel free to contact me at 602-400-3238 as well if u need to

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PostSubject: chapter 3   chapter 3 EmptyTue Nov 03, 2009 6:52 pm

Chapter 3

The high blowing winds bellowed threw the valley, bringing with it the loose debris, sand and all it could pick up, the valley stretched for miles the men looked on with disbelief of the vast desert valley, the men began to move out slowly unsure of what could come at them from any angle.

Commander Redfren: “Right men grab your s**t and move out, we have no time to waste and we defiantly have no time to stand here and scratch our *BEEP*, ty_nezi”

Ty_nezi- recon” yes sir”

Commander Redfren: “i want you to move out ahead of us and scout ahead, if you see anything unusual then report back on the com’s”

Ty_nezi- recon” yes sir”

As ty_nezi moved off a sound could be heard, a jellow like bubble began to consume her, with in seconds she had disappeared; the men were shocked and watched the foot prints of ty_nezi run off into the distant.

Juice1220-assault 2”did you see that? What the hell was that?”

Mu-dib-assault 1”that my friend is the new prototype they are testing out only she has it”

Juice1220-assault 2”god those scientist and there research, i gotta get me one of those”

Lying_in_wait-radio tech” you won’t be getting one of those, no one will be its in reserve for only recon teams and recon teams alone”

Juice1220-assault 2”they get all the fun gadgets”

Commander Redfren: “quite your belly aching men and move out, keep your eyes peeled and your rifles ready”

The men began to move out, looking all around them as none knew what could be lurking in this vast desert, the men were carrying their rifles in there hands aimed at the ground, wearing a helmet fitted with a newly designed automated infer-red laser system, capes flapping in the wind, their armour was designed to change automatically to suit the environment around them, as they marched on for a few clicks, a static noise came from lying’s radio.

Lying_in_wait-radio tech” sir we have an incoming message”

Commander Redfren grabbed the receiver.

“This is commander jack hammer do you read me”

Commander Redfren: “this is commander Redfren of the blood warriors i read you”

Commander Jack hammer” ahh i see you have landed safely, i hope all is safe and all men are well”

Commander Redfren: “yes thanks we had a bit of a rough ride but every think and everyone is still intact”

Commander jack hammer “I’m glad to hear it, how far are you away from my position? The enemy are looking as if they will attack anytime soon”

Commander Redfren”Were a few clicks of your position but were still waiting for our recon person to come back yet with a report”

Commander jack hammer” you didn’t send them out alone did you?”
Commander Redfren” Yeah why?”

Commander Jack hammer”WHAT! Recall your recon team back now; there are things far worse in the desert than these helghan scum”

Commander Redfren” i will do no such thing until she has reported back in”

Commander jack hammer” well i hope she can handle herself against the wilderness”

Commander Redfren”She can she is one of the best recon people out there”

“sir!!!!! Enemy sighted!!!!” shot blazing threw the radio could be heard, massive explosions sounding threw the air could be heard from the blood warriors, the last transmission to be heard from commander jack hammer was “attack!!!!”.
The radio fell silent for a few moments the men growing in concern then ty_nezi was reporting back in.

Ty_nezi recon” sir come in”

Commander Redfren” this is commander Redfren, what is it ty_nezi?”

Ty_nezi recon” sir i see large amount of troops heading towards commander jack hammers men and position”

Commander Redfren” ok ty_nezi sit tight we are on out way”

The men ran for a what could only seem like hours as the sun heat rays beamed upon them, sweat dripping from the armour, they arrived there just in time it seemed, as the men looked down the hill on to district 14 there were troops moving and firing at the buildings jack hammer were suppose to be in, as a small group moved up towards them the mine fields detonated and limbs few everywhere the blood filled the air pouring out from the battered, torn limbs that flew threw the air.

Commander Redfren” BLOOD WARRIORS MOVE OUT!!!!!!!”

The troops rushed down the hill to the outpost of jack hammers men, shots being fired past their heads, explosions going off everywhere, as the men ran to the outpost, the adrenaline pumping threw out their bodies, firing into the helghan scum as the bullets hit them ripping threw the helghan bodies and limbs tearing chunks out of them, blood everywhere men screaming medic!!!! Medic!!!! There was no time to think and feel sorry for the battered bodies of the helghan casualty’s the rain of bullets coming from the blood warriors weapon’s left none alive, a retreat horn could be heard from the helghan building siren, the helghan retreated back and smoke was popped, the short but bloody battle was over the blood warriors moved into the outpost knowing that they had caused some considerable damage to the enemy.

Juice1220-assault 2” WooooooooooHooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yea did you see that bet they never seen that coming”

Mu-dib-assault 1” yea man that was awesome, blood, guts, limbs shredded off their blooded bodies, beats sitting there back in camp”

Commander Redfren” can that s**t now!!!”

The men feel quite as their little celebrations fell silent, commander jack hammer greeted the men and commander Redfren.

Commander jack hammer” im glad you made it, i don’t think we would of survived that one with out you guys showing up”

Commander Redfren” its all in a days work for us, I’m glad you are ok, we will have to rest for now and make our move under the cover of darkness, what’s the current situation of you and your men?”

Commander jack hammer” well there are only a few of us left, they sent out a recon team last night and managed to get past the mine fields undetected”

Commander Redfren” lucky we got here when we did then, my men will keep watch tonight as im sure your men could use a rest”

Commander jack hammer” yes I’m sure they could, i will send news to get them all in here, no need to defend the rest of the base to the west”

Commander Redfren” what happened here? All we got was your radio transmission”

Commander jack hammer” well i don’t know where to start, the other day there were many men in out company now only a few of us remaining, it was a windy night and reports of a dust storm was approaching, so we were readying the building, you know putting up the defensive mines just in case, closing the hatches to the windows, men were sleeping it was quite the storm came in as expected, a helghan platoon was spotted but we didn’t think they would attack to soon due to the poor weather, men began to scream out in the town, chilling screams they were struck fear in to my men, shots were fired, we thought it was the helghan, a few nights before a patrol reported some think lurking down one of the ally ways, but nothing was seen when they walked down there, then as the storm got worse weird sounds, clicking was heard down one of the hallways when they returned to report it, what came next was nothing I’ve ever seen or heard of, something out of nightmares, something i will not want to see again, it was not of this world, its body dripped some kind of liquid that smelt like nothing I’ve ever smelt before, its eyes glared a blueish ray, it ran off before shots were fired, it was fast and agile, then the storm past the next morning, the town was littered with bodies, walls covered in blood, we pulled back to this small outpost and the helghan moved in just over across the bridge they were hitting us with row after row of men, my men were taking hits left, right and centre, i knew our days were numbered, i sent a distress signal, you recived it and now you are here.”

Commander Redfren” gez sounds like you been threw hell, well we will move out in the morning, you, you and you, secure the outpost make sure no room is left unsearched”

“sir yes sir!”

The men of jack Hammers Company talked to the blood warriors exchanging information, battles and current missions that were going on in the war against the helghan, itch was ordered to the roof for a scope around to see if there was anything going on, as itch got to the roof he was cautious of some think he just heard some think that made him jump, he readied his rifle, bearing arms he moved up the stairs, his back turned against the wall, he slowly moved up the stairs, as he got to the top the door to the outside was closed, but a voice was heard, it couldn’t be made out clearly, but itch kicked the door open, and was about to fire when he realised it was Gouki_052.

Sniper itch” GEZ!!!!!! Man you s**t me up then, what the hell you doing up here?”

Gouki_052” wow wow wow! Watch where you are pointing that thing, im just trying to see whats going on”

Sniper itch” i was ordered to do that, who were you talking to?”

Gouki_052” i wasn’t talking to no one and i was not aware anyone being ordered to come and have a look to see what’s going on, plus i was searching rooms and i found the stairs and thought i best check it out”

Sniper itch” well you can get down now as I’m on watch up here”

As Gouki_052 moved past itch he concealed some think with his hand, itch grow suspicious and didn’t trust Gouki_052 at all even tho they were on the same side, itch closed the door and watched his back whilst on watch on the roof.

The night began to fall all was quite on both sides of the town, wind howling threw the town like a pack of wolfs, as itch began to move towards the edge of the roof he looked down his scope, what he saw was helghan troops patrolling the other side, he was dying to fire his rifle with one of the best shots in the isa army none could match his skill of marksmanship, as the night went on nothink really much happened, a few shot were fired from the helghan and shells but not much else was happening, mean while down stairs in the building men grew tired and fell asleep whilst the blood warriors watched over them and the outpost.

As juice and mu-dib patrolled the corridors of the outpost, a noise was heard from one of the rooms, a scuffeling, the men rushed to the room holding up outside the room.

Juice assaulter 2” we go in on 3”

Mu-dib assaulter 1” ok”

“3, 2, 1” hey kicked down the door, but no think was there.

Mu-dib assaulter 1” hmm that was strange”

Juice assaulter 2” yea i know, search and move out i say”

Mu-dib assaulters 1” yea ok let’s do that”

As the men searched the room and found no think in there, their hearts beating fast as they searched the room, some think didn’t look right but they both got out as fast as they could, as the men left some think dropped from the ceiling, it was big, its claws dripped with blood, it made a strange sound as it sucked its claws dry of the blood, it had recently killed but who is not known yet to the members of both commander, the strange thing growled and snarled and then let rip a mighty roar from its unjustified mouth, juice and mu-dib turned round to the room quickly.

To be continued
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PostSubject: Re: chapter 3   chapter 3 EmptyTue Nov 03, 2009 7:52 pm

Frinkin gouvernemental experimentation, now you all gonna die Sad

Ty has disappear , Gouki is maybe a taitor...can the bloodwarriors survive...
lol!
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PostSubject: Re: chapter 3   chapter 3 EmptyWed Nov 04, 2009 6:29 am

ty hasnt disapeared she did when she used her prototype gadget, as stated in the story, i wont be saying what the thing is just yet and where it came from until a certain chapter, the plot thickens and the story will hopefully continue tonight, when i get shot the misses for a few hours Razz i am also hoping to look for images so you can see what the men are using, and will be posted in a new topic, just so you guys/girls can get more involved with the story, help your imaginations run wild as they say.

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PostSubject: Story   chapter 3 EmptyThu Nov 05, 2009 8:20 am

Bloody Awesome
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PostSubject: Re: chapter 3   chapter 3 EmptyThu Nov 05, 2009 4:03 pm

glad ya liked it itch.

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PostSubject: Re: chapter 3   chapter 3 EmptyThu Nov 05, 2009 5:07 pm

i read these imaging that corny 50's style radio stuff from fallout
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PostSubject: Re: chapter 3   chapter 3 EmptyFri Nov 06, 2009 3:14 am

well dont imagine that then init.

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